In January I announced my plan to self-publish my next book. I loved working with the small press that published my first three books, but I wanted to spread my wings and try something new. My main impetus was the desire to create my own cover and hone my editing skills--both necessary since I plan to start my own business offering those services to other writers as part of my new portfolio career.

For the past several years, I had noticed what appeared to be the demise of punctuation in printed material of all types and assumed it was a question of style and author preference. Turns out I was right. However, those preferences are no longer individual; they have gained the weight of printed authority in no less than The Chicago Manual of Style and other influential style manuals.
When I began writing decades ago, I used Strunk and White's slim little volume, The Elements of Style. It was chock-full of common sense advice and recommended using commas every place you would normally pause in verbal speech. I added that to my existing arsenal of absolute rules drummed into me by years of junior high and high school English teachers. Unfortunately I graduated from high school a LONG time ago. Practices and standards have changed, and I missed the boat.

I now recognize the kindness of my previous editors who made no effort to reign in my comma addiction, and I'll do my best--in my own work and that of my clients--to keep modern and up-to-date. Even in the face of near-fatal comma withdrawal. I promise.
*Raises hand sheepishly* Hi. My name is Vonnie Davis and I am a comma ho. If I have to stop to breathe or blink, by golly I'm sticking in a comma. I, too, use the Strunk and Whites book. Guess I better move up to something more modern. But...but I love a good comma, don't you?
ReplyDeleteI do, Vonnie. I'm trying hard not to miss them.
DeleteI had the same comma addiction. I'm over half-way through editing your book and have no comma problems at all! You can give yourself a big pat on the back. Dialogue tags are another issue altogether. **Warning!** I'm about to give you fodder for another post! LOL
ReplyDeleteOh, Jannine, you have no idea how many extraneous dialogue tags I already removed during my last round of edits. I was horrified! I'm waiting for your feedback with bated breath. Unwritten Rules was my first contemporary and the first fresh writing I'd done in many years. I think I was struggling to find my voice. Now I have to go back and inject it into an existing manuscript. LOL
DeleteI love your new cover, Alison.
ReplyDeleteAs for commas, they are not my friends. :-) I follow the Oscar Wilde rule of commas: Spend the first half of the day putting them in and the second half taking them out.
Sandra
That's exactly what I did, Sandy!
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